Excellent Heart touching Music(telugu) with awesome video(hindi) and i miss my love"

Hey I'm here with another song!
I spent a couple of days on this one and i think the results are stunning compared to what i uploaded last time.And i feel the song extremly good when compared to the original telugu movie kedi video song From this time now and on i wont be uploading failure songs anymore. But I thought of that I could upload this one on youtube and see how everyone thinks about it because im really pleased with the way this song turned out to be!
Please Rate and Comment and SAY what is good about the song and what I need to improve.

I'm glad for all opinions! :) (PLEASE dont be too rude) :P

A song dedicated to my loved one who i have lost in the journey of life..................miss you so badly want you back in my life ...
Akkineni Nagarjuna's New movie Kedi song when remixed with
Shael - Soniye Hiriye video album song ...
Telugu Lyrics:
Enduko...enthaki...
telade marii....
ee katha entooo???
neramaa nyamaaa..??
nuvveelaa maaratammm
telusuko... thelchukoo... nesthaamaa???
kanulalo swapname kaadani swasvatham
prasanagaa migilene jeevitham
inthaga vedhana inthaaagaaa veeedhana endukoo mari ee katha ento??

Hope you will enjoy this...........